Score: 0

"Sigh"

submission: RIP Steve Irwin, again

date: September 8, 2006

Down with all unrealated "cartoon" flash movie/game
Down wif all relate wif lame chop steve I Win

Score: 9

"LDK"

submission: Mayhem Beta

date: April 18, 2006

Yea you better finish, ok threat over, time for serious review.
This is quite a great game to play and enjoy, you said you need support(well you didnt say but wanting good score is kinda).

Anyway, here are the review.
1. The graphic is good but maybe the border can have interface? also the border(top and botton black thingy) need to change colour or something...why I say this? because if the stick jump up there it will camoflage(spell it wrong?) and we wont be able to see to see his black head....even those some might not care but this is need to make your flash be better then good.
2. Cheat? Well there no actual fight but I believe this will be add in the "finished version?" by holding "spacebar" we can instant reload = no limited to fight.
2a. No reload time, this is totally up to you but reload is instant.
3. I found the spawn button it actually "p" not t, anyway when we spawn the unit move very slow...? where the challenge in shooting them?....what more is that with 1 bullet the whole lot of them die. Well we have seen Holywood use one bullet to penatrate 10 people in a straight line ^_^.
4. The blackground is ok but need improvement, this is not much of a requirement but you be change, gray is a nice colour but having beautiful building with different style then all perfectly arranged
5. I notice that the sound was done well, you make it so when shoot on ground bullet bounce back...what a minute didnt I say sound...yes I did...anyway when shoot on ground sound was change AND THIS WAS GREAT ^_^
6. Good script....if you left click(shoot) on the black part it wont shoot and only shoot if you click on the main screen, very nicely done.
7. You may not be a person of violence *coff* yea right *coff* BUT alittle blood will help greatly to this flash.
That all I can think of.....good luck at making the finished version, please note this is a suggestion and a feeling that I want to write up, think of it whatever you want...hope this stupid is not over 4000 character or else, sigh stuff retype.

Score: 9

"LDK"

submission: DragonBallZ:Short Parody2

date: April 15, 2006

LOL, that was so random, no story line, no fight scene, no interest scene
BUT the talking was just halirous(spell it wrong?)
Thanks for a good laugh :P, hope to see more Parody soon...one problem I hate the dark vader part...it so stupid and ruin the graphic alitte

Score: 9

"LDK"

submission: The Burglary

date: April 15, 2006

How can the person before this review say it bad, you must havent been at NG for long(not like I am)
Anyway the graphic was nice, background, character doesnt make look good so you wont have fan ;), the police car was weird those...what up with that? look like shoe.
The sound kinda make like we were there stealing ^_^, what more is it intense so it was nice.
Interacivity, it was very detail done so it fell like we there.

Score: 9

"LDK"

submission: Croke

date: April 15, 2006

Hahah, hey don't make it sound like it was bad, this was quite good. I mean alot of people do like hurting and forcing this frog to become big and was hoping for *BOOM* but it didnt happen now did it ><...to all those who read this and was waiting for the explosion, too bad I ruin it...well that is if you willing to read this long thing.
Anyway back to the topic, it was quite good..I alrdy said that didnt I, you even put in a Sent to a friend link, this was very nice, never seen any flash at newground that allow me to do that yet...(hope it work those ^_^)
Anyway one big mistake that you did and people wont like your flash is that they didnt know you have to repeatly make the frog big to unlock next level of toture. Beh too bad hey, hope it pass Judgement day, good luck with this flashes and the next one ;).
My protection is yours by the way :P

Score: 9

"LDK"

submission: X-mas day in the morning

date: April 15, 2006

Wow when they put on the hat it look totally different. Hehe the flash was nice...I not a great fan of South Park but I do watch them ^_^.
The graphic was nice...we cant complain, ohh wait yes we can...I kinda dislike the back of the paino is look really off...is it the shape or the colour?
Sound...the song was good but hey that the whole point of this flash...2 friend laughing at their poor voice ^_^.
The violence was censor so a 1 will do find.
It good enough for other to laugh at the joke your trying to make I guess.

Score: 9

"LDK"

submission: Why Don't You Get A Job?

date: April 15, 2006

(^_^)
Another flash about everyday life about yourself...no no this is not bragging you or anything.
I really like it, it rare to see some of good flash these days.
I really like the theme song...it got a mixture of thing.
We can't complaint on the graphic coz it great already, the sound was good(voice that is)...but I dont like the sound, I got difference taste so dont worry about it too much ;).
Interactivity I gave it high because it was really realistic...and I do seen these similar thing happen before.
It doesnt make me constantly laugh but I just love it when you make the some of the character act lame.

By the way this is about your real life or just a story :P?
Hope you continue to make more great flash, take your time because the longer it take the more it be good.

Score: 9

"LDK"

submission: Not another anti-pokemon!

date: April 15, 2006

Sprite, I dont really like these type of flash much due to the graphic and was not made by their own hand(most of the time).
Anyway even those it short it give the audience alittle laugh I guess, but and so some might give it 0 or some might give it 3-5.
So you need to improve on the length and storyline, this is the tip that I hope people should listen to...never make the sprite large, it look like the trash it is. Make it good size that allow us to see clear enough only...zoom in out we can see the clear pixel like CRAP PIXEL GAME RAGNAROK ONLINE.
Good luck with your next flash and hope to see more of your work in the near futute.

Score: 9

"LDK"

submission: Slackas ep 1

date: April 13, 2006

That was TERRIFIC, even the cursor was nice....
My criticism
Graphic : The colour was good, the background furniture and other thing was done carefully and doesn't seem like to be rush, the character was drawn detailly.
Style: This remind of one of the all time favourite flash at NG, Decline of Video Gaming, to me your flash and theirs are alittle similar
Sound: The voice was easy to hear, the sound effect(fight, gun shot ,etc) was in perfect sync. What more is you put in the credit during the sound that was use, it kinda ruin the movie, but those people that make the sound they be like "^_^"
Violence: First I thought it should be suitable for all ages but later when thing begin(e.g sonic sucide) my rating change.

Ok the 4000 character is max out I write another one >.>

Score: 9

"LDK"

submission: Any Ghost

date: April 13, 2006

What a cute voice you had, anyway back to the topic...you said it was a comic...so I image how funny it would be if it was a comic, shouldnt be story or something.
Anyway the story was nice ^_^, I like how you drawn the main character, he remind me of someone which I forgot, no matter. What did you make this flash for? Visual design or something?
My criticism...I dont like the death part very much...usually director decide to make it dramatic and put in tears, and zoom in to their face...be nice if you would have done that :P. Too late now isnt it.
Hope to see more of your work in the near future.